Improvements

Based on the feedback given to us by our peers, teachers and our own ideas, these are the improvements that we plan to make on our film opening -

Fix the volume of the sound and music.

Add foley to the shots where there is speech because it is currently difficult to hear what is being said.

Move the titles from the centre of the screen to around the edge. Make sure that they are all visible. 

 Change the place of the film title. Move it from the start of the opening to further along- after some of the other titles.

We will remove the dissolve transitions.

We will remove the train station shot as our teacher said that it was not necessary to the opening and did not make sense with the rest of the parallels.